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Postby sandywaterfalls » Mon Sep 23, 2013 3:08 pm

here be the color on her. i'm really not sure about it. for one thing I was thinking I could switch the pants. have the bottom part of the pants be dark and the upper part including the straps be lighter. any whos. yah.

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Re: ryn

Postby Maugh » Tue Sep 24, 2013 1:01 am

The character art is spectacular. Aubrey wants her costume.

The color is a little pastel for my taste. Yo may want to deepen the color and go a little earthier. That pale blue is a cute color, but not easily produced historically, and looks a little unnatural. It also may not print really well, and may clash with the border-blue of the second book's layout design.

Great work on the character though. Color is very easily fixed.
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Re: ryn

Postby sandywaterfalls » Fri Oct 04, 2013 12:37 pm

any suggestions do tell. otherwise it's ready to be sent to ya in large psd format. :)

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Re: ryn

Postby Maugh » Fri Oct 04, 2013 4:30 pm

The face and skin tones look great. For the clothing, it seems like it lacks some depth in the shadows and highlights. Looks a little 2-dimensional.

Still, that's a minor critique, if you want to look at it fine. Otherwise, it's a good color scheme and the lines and color choice are solid. Good work. I'd happily use it the way that it is.
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Re: ryn

Postby sandywaterfalls » Fri Oct 04, 2013 4:57 pm

i'll diffinatly touch that up :)
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Re: ryn

Postby sandywaterfalls » Fri Oct 04, 2013 5:27 pm

okay so heres her with more shading :)

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