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Titan

Postby sandywaterfalls » Mon Sep 23, 2013 3:11 pm

He be deh man and he know it.

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Re: Titan

Postby Maugh » Tue Sep 24, 2013 12:55 am

Feet are still too big, especially his left foot. If you compare the foot size to his head, you'll see what I mean. The thighs and legs are probably still too thin, but not too long. Face and hands are really well done. Armor is good. Also something slightly wrong with his left thumb. (the thumb on the right-hand side of the image, but on the character's left hand.)

For more masculine characters, it can help to use more straight lines than curves for the surfaces. Especially around the feet. I realize that is very general and terrible feedback, but it's something to think about.
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Re: Titan

Postby sandywaterfalls » Fri Oct 04, 2013 2:07 pm

well i think the feet and hips are good. any whos. if theres still any thing let me other wise it's ready in big psd

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