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Postby sandywaterfalls » Sat Nov 16, 2013 2:00 pm

So if the septer thing works it could be a bit more discreet like a cane maybe. but yah. i was thinking for effects maybe he could be sending out magic illusions making you think your seeing something your not. Like butterflies or doves flying at you or something.
if the septer isnt what you want he could be doing the same thing only just with his hand. The last pose is kinda like a jedi move " you won't remember my presence. you've never seen me before" and i could put in some "invisible" effect. lol! yah anywhos.

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Re: mesmer

Postby sandywaterfalls » Mon Dec 16, 2013 6:06 pm

since i have the sketch, here it be just in case you have something to say before i clean it up and add flats :)
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Re: mesmer

Postby sandywaterfalls » Fri Dec 20, 2013 7:03 pm

just the flats. I did add a bit of shading but yah obviously not done lol!

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Re: mesmer

Postby Maugh » Fri Dec 20, 2013 7:17 pm

Cool. Hips are a really sharp, probably should have a little more shadow over from the hair at the top of his forehead.

Other than that, looks good to me. I'll run it by aubrey to be sure.
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Re: mesmer

Postby sandywaterfalls » Sat Dec 21, 2013 3:51 pm

here's the finished one. let me know if there are any more edits :)

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Re: mesmer

Postby Maugh » Sun Dec 22, 2013 1:42 am

Just a minor one. I think the pants are still super pointy, and that looks really odd to me. Just get rid of the wide points and follow the normal contour of his thigh.

Apart from that, good work. Thanks.
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Re: mesmer

Postby sandywaterfalls » Mon Dec 23, 2013 4:08 pm

no more hip poof!! :)
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