War Mage box art

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War Mage box art

Postby Aiphos » Tue Jan 14, 2014 7:14 pm

No, I'm not dead. Yes, I'm still working on this. Yes, it's completely Murder's fault that it's not done. And yes, I'm really, really sorry for the delay!
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Re: War Mage box art

Postby Maugh » Wed Jan 15, 2014 1:43 am

Looks great! and more importantly, we're very glad you're not dead! Except Sammy. He probably prefers death, but go figure. He's a liche.

They all look great. I'll show them to Aubrey tomorrow morning. (she's already asleep.)

Wonderful work. Looking forward to seeing the final.
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Re: War Mage box art

Postby sandywaterfalls » Wed Jan 15, 2014 12:24 pm

Such preetty liiines. Ooooooooo aaaaaaaah 8D* ( leave it to me to drool over lines...) Lookin good! Might I simply suggest trying to widen the blond guys eyes? Like battle rage. You don't have to listen to me I just thought it might be a good expression. I'm looking at it on my phone so his eyes looked squinty, but that could just be the tinyness.
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Re: War Mage box art

Postby Aiphos » Mon Feb 03, 2014 5:26 pm

Thanks for the suggestion! I made Hawk's eyes (and Mercy's) a bit bigger. I keep forgetting that realism is just not as fun (or effective at communication) as caricatures!
This is the progress so far. I had to completely change Murder because he just wasn't fitting. The pink scribbles represent magical awesomeness that may or may not look so awesome when I'm done.
Any additional suggestions would be greatly appreciated! I plan to have this finished by tomorrow!
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Re: War Mage box art

Postby Aiphos » Tue Feb 04, 2014 7:18 pm

Still working on it! I'm pretty excited about how it's turning out, especially given how challenging weapons and magic are for me since I have, like, zero experience with such things!
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Re: War Mage box art

Postby sandywaterfalls » Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:23 pm

lookin awsome!!!! behold the magical mejesty!!!
one thing i did just notice though. the woman at the bottom left? her wait and hip could use to be a bit wider :) looks a bit disporportionate wiht the shoulders. But yes... behold. haha! i love sammy! he is still fancy!
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Re: War Mage box art

Postby sandywaterfalls » Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:24 pm

oh and bring her waist up a little bit :D lookin good!!!!
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Re: War Mage box art

Postby sandywaterfalls » Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:25 pm

this is really weird. but i lvoe the axe weilders teeth and mouth. haha! weird but true :) great job
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